Tuesday, 4 April 2017

EP // BRIEF 5 // RESIDE // THIRD DRAFT

After sending off the second draft Hannah's feedback was as follows:

  • Dunno if I'm a fan of like repeating some of the images and rotating them
  • Also on page 6, the single image of the estate could we possibly move it to either the left or right side of the page just cause I don't want it to run through the bind
  • The only page I like the repeated images on is page 7 with the posts
The same feedback had a simulr feel. No much left to do essentially but again the feedback was a bit useless. Again, I had to go back to Hannah and ask for more information into what she meant and the reasoning for some of the feedback she had given.  The changes was made to thesecond draft below.
















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