Once the change was made from the first set of feedback, I adapted the publication and send the second draft to Hannah for review. (see second mockup blog post). Her feedback was as follows:
- Dunno if I'm a fan of like repeating some of the images and rotating them
- Also on page 6, the single image of the estate could we possibly move it to either the left or right side of the page just cause I don't want it to run through the bind
- The only page I like the repeated images on is page 7 with the posts
Again, the same issues I had previously were still the same. The feedback was very uninformative and lacked reasoning for the feedback. On a positive note, the feedback was getting smaller! She speaks about the binding but hasn't told me what binding she wanted so to comment on the binding was problematic as the position of the bind could vary depending on the actual method.
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